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Teen Poetry #8

Heaven's Door

LucNanalh
Junior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 11

0 posted 2007-04-23 12:08 PM

I had to pause for a moment.
I searched the vast plains of my vocabulary,
my repetoire of sly remarks;
But found a single action to fit the occasion- I smiled.

You encompassed in that very moment,
every desire and need,
any certainty or doubt;
That may have, at one point found refuge in my mind.

I desire you- For the way your face plays a symphony to my soul.
I need you- Because I see in your regard a reason to improve.
I am certain- Simply as a result that you have chosen me.
I am doubtful- As a consequence to how unreal this feels.

I wanted to hold you in that moment,
not because it felt so right,
letting you go seemed so wrong-
Nothing to separate us, air resembled a traitor.

Just keep coming my way,
approaching how you have been.
Just keep smiling my way,
making me feel what you have been.

I had to pause for a moment.
I searched the vast plains of my heart,
my scathed soul;
Found a single person that made me live this occasion- I smiled.
I saw Sarah.

One day there might be no more to write,
but I'd like for this story to go on.
Because as long as she lives through my thoughts-
I can always hold on.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-05-26 08:27 AM

This was IN-CRED-I-BLE. Seriously, I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Going in my library!

Pen

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2007-05-27 02:04 AM

Lovely

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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