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playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

0 posted 2007-04-16 08:09 AM

She smiles.
Her mouth is full of lies
So full no words of truth spill out
Just untruths in their place

She listens, with a snake in her heart
To the laughter in the room next door
Idly crossing arms and legs
So nothing comes undone

Fire breathes down her throat,
Poison in her lungs
Watch as they all shrink from her
And what she has become

Reddened hands cover porcelain handle
Lock slides into place.
Watch her as she slides to the cold and white
Tiles of her prison

Watch her, choking back a scream
and choking on her lunch
Tears leave no trace of broken eyes
And hair will hide her face with shame

She holds her broken chest, holds tight.
The lava flowing from her heart
Red-hot liquid burns her veins
And sets her skin alight.

Watch her as she looks at me
Her touch, it burns my hand
Eyes
Watching,
Hating.
They look at me
They beg. They want me to understand

“I never meant to be like this”

Sparks of hate and tears of loss
These eyes, now they’re telling truths
They crack the mirror, right in half
My body now broken to shards

Mouth opened wide,
But then I close it.
Nothing she can say
Will make a difference, anymore

- I know I haven't posted in here before. I really look forward to reading and *meeting* everyone here.
~Love and Laughter~
~ Cheye

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-04-16 05:40 PM

hey intresting write. i liked it alot. lots of deep emotion.

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2007-04-17 07:21 AM

Totally agree! Nice poem, loads of emotion. A few lines were a bit off. But I still enjoyed. I sure hope it's not about you, and if it is that you will find help. Email me if you ever need to talk.

Smiles,
Free_Spirit07

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Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

3 posted 2007-04-17 10:41 PM

ClockworkOrange : thanks for the kind reply, and for reading.

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

4 posted 2007-04-17 10:42 PM

Free_Spirit: thank you for the ever so warm reply. yeah, gosh i know some of the lines were awkward as anything. thanks for reading and for the honesty.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-04-18 12:22 PM

I love this it is so descriptive... Welcome to the Teen part...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2007-04-18 02:35 AM

well done

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

7 posted 2007-04-18 02:43 AM

hunnie_girl and Juju: thanks so much for taking to the time to read and respond. And for the welcome. i figure, as a teen, lurking in this forum seemed fitting.

~ cheye

strike.the.match
New Member

since 2007-04-22

Posts 3

8 posted 2007-04-23 02:20 PM

well done i like this very much xxx

raindrops on roses in girls in white dresses. p!atd xxx

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