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Mistrusted King
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Mistrusted King |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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I feel im in camotose, And fixed with rubber tubes. The broken voice inside of me, Has been beaten and abused. I bowed down and gave my trust, All to my begotten king; I told him all my deepest sins, I gave him my belief. But when i needed him in life the most, I just wanted to believe, That I could always fall on him, But he turned his back on me. Now tell me im not sane, Tell me im not in my right mind. You can tell me whatever you want to tell me, But can you tell me if you would trade me lives? [This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (04-15-2007 04:38 PM).] |
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rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
I liked this! I'm not going to pretend I know exactly what you're talking about, but I can guess and it is exactly what I'm feeling right now... Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this is about a inner battle of believes and faith. a story of feeling like God has turned away from you. and i dont care what anyone says,some things happen in life that shakes a person too hard; they just feel like there being punished. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
Hey there! I liked this, and it is true, everyone battles with faith. But, its the darkest times we, people don't see God because we are too focused on what's wrong. Believe me, even if you feel He has turned His back on you, He hasn't He is right there holding you in His special hands. Keep believing, and keep strong. I don't wanna come across too harsh, I just wanted to share that  ) - Free_Spirit07 |
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