Day Into Night(another song, very slow)

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Teen Poetry #8

Day Into Night(another song, very slow)

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-04-07 01:45 PM

The world is hangin on my shoulders
It seems like I can’t take the weight
But I know …
If I set my shoulders back and hold my head up high
Everything will be okay

Some Day…
I will rule MY present and MY future
I will know right and wrong
They will recognize who I really am
And I’ll find the patience to write a song

And I know
That day may not be now
But know that in my heart
Is someone
Who only needs a little freedom

To be okay
To feel all right
To notice the passing of day and night
Is it wrong
That I don’t care if anyone likes my song

Oooooooh

Am I wrong to not care
If all the other people stare
Is it so bad that I’m me
That I’m discovering who I want to be
Is it so bad…is it so bad…is it sooo bad

That in my heart is someone
Who only needs a little freedom?
To be okay
To feel alright
To finally notice the passing of day and night

And I wonder
If tonight
When the sun sets tonight
If I’ll be alright
The sparkle back in my eyes…
If I’ll be alright

If I’ll notice the passing of day into night

music_is_my_soul
Junior Member

since 2007-04-07

Posts 18
MA, USA

1 posted 2007-04-07 04:56 PM

I really loved it, you should get a guitarist or something, and sing it, because i think this song would make it really far in the world.

can I post a song written by a famous artist, or do I have to write my own? just wondrin'

I'm the kind-a human wrecakge that ya love!
~Gerard Way

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-04-09 09:22 PM

i think you kinda have 2 write ur own...

ya know...plagarism...and all

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