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What i see |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
when I look in the mirror all I see, is sad brown eyes loking back at me, knowing all they've seen and all that they've cried, and after each heartbreak the light in them died, I look in the mirror I see me lips in a frown, so many times my heart has let them down, I think sometimes, 'i'll smile today.' then thought of you come flooding my way, Theb I return the gaze to my eyes, ones that finally realize, when I look in the mirror all I really see, is all the pain inside of me. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This is good.. i like it.. then again i like all of your poems... |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
this was truly amazing! i thought it was very deep and well written, exept then doesnt have a b,LOL |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohmigosh. It doesn't I seriously thought it did have a b. ahhh why didn'y anyone tell me that before:P ahh Well tx you both for replying and I would change it but I have dial up and it takes to long and i'm too lazy hehe... hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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