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DEAR MISSIN U....
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DEAR MISSIN U.... |
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Me...Myself New Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 4 |
Dear missin u... just like desert miss the rain Dear missin u... just like flower miss butterfly Dear missin u... just like thirsty miss the water Dear missin u... just like drinker miss the wine Dear missin u... just like u r missin me.... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Welcome To Passions. great 1st poem. I liked it 'cos I can relate so much to it right now...some errors that make it difficult to read add some s on the end of somethings, to make it work out but thats all... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Welcome To Passions... Nice First post.. Somehow i think ive read this same style before so maybe you have been here before.. Anyway welcome and nice post.. |
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Me...Myself New Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 4 |
thnks u both for replyin.. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
I don't get it. ????? |
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