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My Angel |
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krazy 4 her Junior Member
since 2006-09-14
Posts 38Your parent's front porch |
I watch her from the outside As she cries her silent tears I hold her close beside me As she lets go of all her fears They treat her like a curse That needs to die Maybe they would rethink it If they saw her through my eyes My angel Beauty and charm My angel I'll let no harm Come to you Sweet angel I whsiper words of comfort As she slowly falls asleep I keep watch over my girl As she becomes so weak Cause they're killing her She won't make it very far I lean in and whisper 'They just don't see how gorgeous you are' My angel Beauty and charm My angel I'll let no harm Come to you Sweet angel ~~~This was written, and it was supposed to be a song, but I had nothing else to go on so I called it a poem. Haley (Nostalgic*Pride) was sort of my editor for the whole thing, and Kiara (decietful_siren)... well, she laughed at me already. =)~~~ |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
Wow, I remember this poem. We did this like, a year ago when the band was first starting out. And you kept trying to play guitar to it and nothing worked. And then, it took me two hours to make you accept you had written a poem. Lol, good times. I liked it then, and I like it now. Though you never would tell me who it was about. Care to tell now? (Probably not, but a girl can dream...) |
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deceitful_siren Junior Member
since 2006-09-14
Posts 20USA |
Poor, poor oblivious sister. He's refering to you of course. I don't understand why the two of you don't start going out already, and move off to get married in Vegas. Lol. Beyond that little factoid, I- it also pains me to say- enjoyed reading this. Hmph, that'll be the first and last time no doubt you'll hear me say it. I do think it's a bit choppy in some places though, so HA! |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
i don't exactly know what in the world is going on with what y'all are saying[lol..actually,i know exactly what y'all mean and are saying, but im going to act like i dont..] and move on to say, Krazy, great job. i absolutely loved this poem..its wonderful! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wonderful poem! So delightful to read, and I'm sure the girl you wrote it to must be someone very special.  Keep sharing and welcome to Pip! ~Alli~ |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
awwww awesome! this is cuuute! : ) |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow i have to admit i really liked that:P this person your talking about seems like you like her and therefor should go out with:P hope eveything works out for the best... hope to see more poems by you but who know maybe when you are trying to write a poem you might acually get a song out of it:P good post oh and by the way WELCOME TO PIP  ...hunnie* A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi hi krazy 4 her! I'ma start tearing you down and breakin' your heard and laughing in your face, right... now! Nah, just kidding, I'ma be nice... for now, although you weren't! You wanted to brain wash me... but I showed you! mwhahaha! Oooooooooook! Welcome to passions, nice to see another one of those from the crazy clan of pride and siren "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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in_luv_06 New Member
since 2006-09-30
Posts 9 |
like all the other poems i've read today... i LUV this poem.lol. i hope the dude i luv feels that way bout me..... |
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