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SiR3N Junior Member
since 2007-03-07
Posts 16Pennsylvania |
I cant tell you how I feel. The words wont cling; they drift away, intoxicated, slight, unreal, resisting what I want to say (how I know our love won't fade, the things I dream when you are gone, the stuff of which all want is made, why absences go on and on). They reel and stow away their charms, distracted, shady, and aloof; I'd rather have you in my arms and whisper nothings, love, as proof. |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Oh...my...gosh. I LOVE THIS!!! the rhythym and rhyming were perfect. You did such an awesome job! GREAT WRITE!!!!! pen |
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