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Teen Poetry #8
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Kaos
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between space and time
0 posted 2007-02-17 01:25 PM


Bursting rage
lashing out
pain inflicted
emotions equitted
thoughts dark
sight clear
Mirror empty
I am nothing

" Everytime he held you close, yea were you thinking of me..." Stab My Back-All American Rejects
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nick_lyss
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1 posted 2007-02-17 11:11 PM

it was interesting and a good short poem.
                           courtney.
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2 posted 2007-02-20 01:54 AM

I agree really liked this nice and short but means so much...
hunnie

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