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Teen Poetry #8

I Didn't Love You

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-02-09 09:37 AM

I didn't want to kill someone,
I didn't want to scream.
I wouldn't cry, I couldn't laugh,
It all seemed like a dream.
See, you'd left me for a total $lut,
Who just loved putting out.
And I was just another girl
You didn't care about.

But something weird was going on,
I didn't want to die.
My heart was whole, my spirit untouched,
My eyes completely dry.
And when he came sniffing around,
I didn't tell him to get lost.
I flirted and laughed with this fantastic guy,
And it actually didn't cost.

But until I could be happy with him,
I had to know what was going on.
So I sat up one night, unplugged the phone,
And didn't speak until dawn.
And after some hard-core thinking,
And knowing how I know myself.
I found that I didn't loved you,
And now I love someone else.

Scars are Tattoos with Better Stories.

STOP_JUDGiiN_M3
Junior Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 16

1 posted 2007-02-09 09:54 AM

Wow...I been in that type of situtation!! But I loved the last stanza!!! You put details into the last drop nice work!!! Good Job!!! You should check out some of my work..

FTR...ALLDAii!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-02-09 11:27 PM

Wow, one of my favorites by you, I liked it.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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