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Teen Poetry #8

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fanatic-flyer
Junior Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 26
Bournemouth

0 posted 2007-02-07 01:10 PM

Does your friend talk behind your back?
Forever calling you names
Does the class laugh with her...?
Nothing seems the same

She calls you boffin
She calls you witch
She calls you what she pleases
Anything to make you twitch

You sit alone
In the canteen at lunch
Feeling all left out
As upon your sanwich you munch

Then a new girl
Comes into class
takes a liking to you
You soon make friends fast

So hold your head high
And ignore them all
Your better than them
So let them take that fall.

JeffD
Junior Member

since 2007-02-06

Posts 28
CT

1 posted 2007-02-07 05:18 PM

That was written really well. I enjoyed it a lot and it is the truth because it happens in everyday life.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2007-02-08 09:12 AM

Hi,

I haven't seen you on pip before so I'd like to extend my warmest of welcomes to you! I hope you enjoy the site as much as I know I have.

Wonderful poem; Like JeffD said it does apply quite easily to every day life and I like how you did that.

Thanks for sharing

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->---

fanatic-flyer
Junior Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 26
Bournemouth

3 posted 2007-02-08 04:05 PM

thank you so much, i am new on here and thanks for the welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed that poem, its happening to me right now so it was pretty easy to base and write upon. Thanks again

Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =)

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