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Teen Poetry #8
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um_idk
Junior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 32
minnesota
0 posted 2007-01-24 03:56 AM


you doint have to worry
i no ive lived a story
ive seen a lot of shitt
and ive done a lot of shitt
im done with it
every little bit
im ready to throw my knife
and with you start a new life
so hold me tight
and tell me itll be alright
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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2007-01-24 09:55 AM

Take out the swear words and punctuate it and spell the stuff right.
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