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Teen Poetry #8

thinking of you

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2007-01-15 05:44 AM

up all night thinking of your smiles
remebering your laughter, it rings for miles
no time to sleep when your in my thoughts
my mind see's your face, and it wont ever stop

up till the sunrise, as the world becomes bright
wondering if youre thinking of me watching the sky
smiling and laughing and i stand to my feet
thinking of your eyes now and when ours will meet

all night your voice is in my head sitting in the dark
wishing youd see what you've done to my heart
hours my thoughts cant change from your smiling face
hoping you'll see how you've made my heart race

for days and nights i've thought only of you
wishing for this dream to come true
all night i spend hoping, wishing, and remembering things youve said
morning comes and i've never felt more rested

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

1 posted 2007-01-15 08:21 AM

pretty. i liked it. you know youlook exactly like one of these twins i know. freakishly like her, her name is brook. lol. wonderful poem bec (if i can call you that) i like it b/c it's not sad like a lot of mine.

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

mnelson07
New Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 7
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-01-15 11:53 AM

I'm not sure if I liked it due to the actual poem or if it's because I can related. Whatever the case, I really liked the poem as a whole, good job!

hunnie_girl