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A Child's Toy
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A Child's Toy |
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Hope_for_S0me New Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 6 |
A child's Toy She Told me one day she loved me I told her that back instantly I was deceived, I tried straighting that distorted image out, I lived for her she almost killed me, by leaving me behind to bite the dirt hoping to be able to throw me away like a child's toy that was broke. But She came along and picked me up repaired me and cleaned me making me whole knowing my previous owner had broken me. She is very gentle never to break me, but to hold me close in her embrace never to loosen that lovely, dreamy, peaceful grip. she broke me, but She Repaired me. (There are 2 different shes you can tell by one "S" being capitalized and one being being lower cased, this is a friends poem about his Ex and his new Girl friend he asked me to post it knowing im into poetry, i told him i would and im gunna print him off the feed back when i get enough ^_^) |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Fix the spelling and try describing this instead of telling it |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
hum, it's one of the most confusing peices i've read i followed along, but, it needs more specifics. no one will judge you here and if they are foolish enough to try thir oppinion shouldn't matter. tell us. use fake names if you must, but try to make it clearer. -Lovely "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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