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rewrite) Tears and hate
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rewrite) Tears and hate |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I feel hot tears run down my face. where is it from, these tears and hate? Here one moment and gone the next. I succumb to both, I break and bend. the hot fury,that rarely claims me Wet tears blurr my sight, hard to see This torment from hell flares up in hot bursts tears stain my cheeks giving me up the worst How can it all be here, these emotions? My hysterics, explode in explosions, but when I am left to recompense, by the time I finally see sense, my anger has managed to slink away. My pain is still there, after my fury fades. I leave myself heart-broken and in tears, without a flame within, to face my fears. I address each one, separate, until ,can't handle anymore , I’ve had my fill. I yell, I scream, voices shout in my ears, then a few words , heartfelt, bring me to tears. The most complicated feelings are tears and hate. I'll never understand why they can't go away. One leaves you in an emotional wreck, rarely helps, the other just makes a mess. Between these two feelings, a challenge in life. To keep them from destroying me, unique fight. Won't be easy, nor all so new. Well, I'll endure, I always do. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Between these two feelings, a challenge in life. To keep them from destroying me, unique fight. Won't be easy, nor all so new. Well, I'll endure, I always do.~ i loved this Rhia very good... flow was good not forced at all. hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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