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Teen Poetry #8

lyrics of your life

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-12-31 01:24 AM

all were looking for is something to believe in,
something to keep us going, something worth the grieving
look past the broken hearts, past the fallen spirits
look down deep within, where nothing exists but lyrics

the song that explains life, the song that has it all
the soundtrack to your heart that lifts you from the fall
keep walking till you find it, where the path may be unseen
you'll find your true desires, what you can really be

....ok, ya....i dont get it either...ha ha...

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

1 posted 2006-12-31 01:17 PM

i loved the line
"look down deep within, where nothing exists but lyrics" it was amazingly worded.
even though i have the ablitly to have word things and make them flow when i see that talent in others it inspires me.

-Whitteny

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

2 posted 2007-01-01 03:34 PM

you dont get it? it was an awesom write

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

3 posted 2007-01-01 04:25 PM

Who doesn't get what?

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