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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104
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Blue skies surround me but all I do is cry I don’t have a clue why I have these feelings inside I hide them from the world, to better deceive I try so hard if only I could believe I’d believe in love that you would give me But I don’t because I know where it leads It doesn’t bring me happiness, but instead a broken heart And I’m sick and tired of being lost and torn apart I can’t stand the pain you put me through each day So I’m giving up on you now it is the end I don’t care what you say its my turn to defend Myself in what I say, and that is goodbye Since you don’t care about me, instead you fight You promise me promises you wouldn’t dare to keep Yeah that is so terrible keeping a promise to me! I don’t trust anyone, especially not you And to think you had me thinking I loved you too I never loved you and I never will And I hope now you don’t love me still Forget about my face my name and embrace Just please don’t lie and just say goodbye |
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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
WOW!!!!! that's all I have to say that was great and I liked I. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wwzwlmd8 |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Sounds like a painful experience, but I am glad to see "its my turn to defend" ... It shows your spirit to remain true to your self and not settle for less than the respect that you deserve. Nice write  Now your "broken smile" can be fixed, hmm?He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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