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Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

0 posted 2007-06-26 09:08 PM

There is a thrusting aftershock in my mind
the way fear pushes,
but my heart pulls back so agrressively.
Is this the friction
that causes my eyes to fill with electricity
every time I see you?

However,
there are still some insulators,
and they are preventing the flow of me
from being a good conductor
of your love.

It is time to flip the switch,
and time to sumbit.
You have been waiting,
and it's been such a long time.
You see,
many soft hands have caused a power surge,
but you are the one
that is making me short circuit.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-06-26 09:10 PM

now this is awesome

you are going to be a good one to read

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

2 posted 2007-06-26 09:11 PM

Why thank you.

lightkeeper
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

3 posted 2007-06-27 05:46 AM

Blessed is the person that causes you to short circuit.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-06-27 09:24 AM

pretty goooood man.

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

5 posted 2007-06-27 03:26 PM

Blessed is the person indeed. It's not very easy is to cause me to short circuit.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

6 posted 2007-06-27 10:34 PM

DUDE!!
This was so amazing...
I really liked it and I liked how well the whole thing flowed..
AMAZING!!!!!!

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

7 posted 2007-06-27 10:50 PM

Thank you Jezzika, I am pleased to hear that you liked it.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
Blessings and Guidance

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2007-07-03 08:40 AM

loved it...made me smile just reading how well your thoughts came across! Welcome~~

M

Gifted
Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 140
Caribbean

9 posted 2007-07-04 09:26 PM

Thank you for your comments nakdthoughts. It is well appreciated. I'm glad you liked the poem.

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