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Masked, my not a Nightmare
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Masked, my not a Nightmare |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Running i fall in billowing Skirts, Picked up by one masked Over the bushes we fly by horse And into his shelter much too fast Unsure of this thing, this man? I don't know where i am, in the darkness It must e a dream Is it, is it not, i wish it were not this he sits there as a vulture stalking me, his prey i bevre should have been alone i wish that to this day i ran my fingers over his mask he had taken it off and left i was there alone, so happy to be but the door i could not heft then wandering into unknown space, i'm out side my own front yard blocking the path from this terror i find myself now safe with no gaurd Gone the true nightmare Just a dream the nightmare Just a dream, i say with my hand on his mask "Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired." |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow, i've never read anything like this. amazing. it's one of the most favorite of any poem i've ever read. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this is much a different poem then i have ever read it reminds me alot of phantom of the opera very nice job |
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jayjara Member
since 2007-05-02
Posts 90Florida |
yea, i thought the same thing, phantom of the opera beginning. cool though -J |
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