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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Dedicated to .. RAsa and eve In the middle of the dance floor, she twirls and spins. Leaps up to the stage, twisting and movin’ Don’t want to let her go, she is there through thick and thin. Her happiness speeds along the crowd exploding onto faces. Dancing through the night, singing on the stage. Her voice crystal clear, vocals in the night, marking an empty page. Cheering me up when I turn my back on the world. Making me smile. Glued to the velvet chair afraid, pulling me up, to show my style. Glaring at anyone who might laugh, she makes living worthwhile. Turns an ordinary dance step into something beyond the naked eye. That’s why it near killed me when we had to say goodbye. Tore up my heart right then and there, I couldn’t help but cry. Standing there in elegant grace, I could tell she was holding back. Twin teardrops adorned our eyes, from my soul out, it hurt so bad Despite me leaving, nothing can touch the memories we’ve had. The warm rain falling disguises the tears that have just started to fall. Pure water merges with salty tears, hugging each other trying to stall. We both know we’ll be different when we meet again, Time changes us all. She will stay home with our other friends, who will change and grow up while I’m gone. Developing memories that I won’t get, making me more withdrawn. Coming back, we’ll still be friends, just typing in two clashing fonts. For people like her there is a word that describes her really well Bestowed on so few, but her it fits, explains better than I can tell. I met her because I was lucky, one in a lifetime friend, a rebel. An angel here on earth, dramatically virtuous, HERO. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
i liked this poem very much Rhia, i could understand what it was a bout it was in good stanza form. it could feel the feelings in this. i hope to read more soon... hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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MixedChica Junior Member
since 2006-11-10
Posts 34 |
how many times a day do you bring tears to my eyes? Rhia your to good a friend to be true. I'm scared then when you visit i might not let you leave again. This is a great poem and i'm honered that you think so highly of me (even if i don't deserve it) I love you and miss you so much |
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poemqueen Junior Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 26 |
rhia great poem |
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