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Teen Poetry #8

Catch a plane?

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-11-22 09:44 PM

Im always telling them "be yourself"
But right now there's nothing I want more
Than to be somebody else

I'm not too happy with 'right now'
Everyone else seems fine
I don't have too many friends
Or at least any that are friends all the time

I wanna break off
I wanna get out
I wanna quit
My stupid clique
I wanna find something thats mine
And i gotta find it quick

Im on the verge of a breakdown
I close to going insane
I gotta leave
Gotta run away

Should I maybe catch a plane?

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2006-11-23 11:45 PM

Im always telling them "be yourself"
But right now there's nothing I want more
Than to be somebody else

I'm not too happy with 'right now'
Everyone else seems fine
I don't have too many friends
Or at least any that are friends all the time.

wow i can relate heavily to this been there it suck thaks for sharing this poem i liked it, the feeling was potrayed nicely...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

2 posted 2006-11-25 06:44 PM

this was a very down to earth piece that a lot of people can relate to. very nice work and even thou im late on the comment i still love it, goin in my library

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

3 posted 2006-11-29 10:00 PM

I LOVED the first 2 stanzas, absolutely breathtaking how relatable and well written they were. I don't think the end was quite as powerful but I did love this write, keep it up!

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

4 posted 2006-12-10 10:55 PM

you told me about this poem and now i found it so i thought i'd review it good job i agree i liked the first 2 stanzas the most

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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