Teen Poetry #8 |
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Just another day |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
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Just another day Just another girl Trying hard to make it In this sinful horrid world Each day I awake And get back in routine After awhile it gets Kind of obscene Burly men all around Put on a strong mean face but we all know its just their apprehensive stage Trying to be cool, Trying to fit in I see everyone worry and it sorta makes me grin Because what is "cool"? and what is the "in thing"? All these words and phrases have gotten so cliche Just be who you are Don't try to conform Because people who are themselves Wont ever have to reform Get the picture? Idk if this poem makes sense at all or anything...but i was bored and wrote it. okay yeha |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
i really like this I go through these same thoughts every day thinking about my best friend...she think's she's so cool |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol i know tons of people like that...so annoying *rolls eyes* but i can be like that too sometimes so i cant really talk haha. Anyways thanks for the comment : ) |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey bekah, How nice to see a new poem by you, at last! Especially one that is so well written, I'm constantly amazed at how much your poetry keeps improving from poem to poem. When I thought what you'd written before couldn't get any better it does in the next one and I'm amazed all over again. This poem is no exception to what I said above. I loved this one a lot; the general idea/content is awesome! It's a "be yourself don't change for anyone" kind of feel to it. Yet, it talks enough about everyone not doing that which makes it interesting to read, plus the flow is superb. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading this poem ![]() "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks stargal : ) That means alot! |
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since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I was trying to pick out my favorite stanzas from the poem but I just can't! All of it is just so true, and I can relate to it so much! I really enjoyed reading this one, keep it up! ![]() ~Alli~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Have the honor of being my 900th ![]() lolz "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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nostalgic*pride Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 122NowhereVille |
OMG, this poem is so good. I LUVED EET! |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i totally agree with what stargal said about the "feel" of the poem and i loved it i hate following what everyone else is doing but sometimes i do any way and i usually regret it because i just like being me way better (i was trying to explain why i liked it soo much) ![]() |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
aww thanks stargal for being your 900th lol 3 time more than mine! Thanks to everyone else for posting on my poem : ) muco appreciated |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Wow.. this was amazing.. and so many times.. people don't like you because your not "it".. but life goes on and it should be done by being who you are.. great job. ~Heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks! : ) |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Kewl! You got a picture! Nice to see your face, nice to know I'm not talking to some crazed killer online?!?!? lolz Thanks fer... everything bekah, like sharing this post ![]() "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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