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Teen Poetry #8

Its Over

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-01-01 04:13 PM

I can feel it flowing through me
And i can see its taking over
Doubt is clouding my sight
silencing me as its cover

Depression has it hold
A grip taught and tight
Thoughts running through me
I'm losing this fight.

Tear soaked pillows
And a broken heart to mend
This was way too good to be true
It had to come to an end.

I'm getting tired of this
and your stupid love game
Don't yell at me cause
I'm not the one to blame.

Its over and you know this
So quit with the phone calls
I'm not gonna pick up
I'm breaking down my walls

I'm opening up
And shine my own light
Not gonna be the victim in this scene
I'll be the victor in this fight

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2009-01-03 11:19 PM

hey this is really great man. its really emotional and deep. i related very well.

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