Teen Poetry #8 |
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Orange Moon |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Orange moon waxed in sight Of the hungry star lit sky Too afraid to swallow But brave enough to taste Of light that ended blackness "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Woah...There's allot of meaning there I'm not getting isn't there? Great job!!! My melancholy is purely my own |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
short and simple. i loved it. your just great with words. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Thanks Guys, it feels good to be back. "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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JenniferMaxwell![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Good write! Looking forward to reading more of your poems. |
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