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Teen Poetry #8

Orange Moon

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-12-29 06:08 PM

Orange moon waxed in sight
Of the hungry star lit sky
Too afraid to swallow
But brave enough to taste
Of light that ended blackness

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-12-30 10:38 PM

Woah...There's allot of meaning there I'm not getting isn't there?

Great job!!!

My melancholy is purely my own

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-12-30 10:52 PM

short and simple. i loved it. your just great with words.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-12-31 10:41 AM

Thanks Guys, it feels good to be back.

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

4 posted 2008-12-31 03:57 PM

Good write! Looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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