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Teen Poetry #8

In Deep

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2008-12-27 04:00 AM

Im so deep that I cannot breathe!
You are in too but not with me.

Of all the times I told you,
I love you

I never told you,
I am IN love with you.

Now I want to say it,
and I know that it will not make a difference.

Though I still want you to know.
You were my first love.

I realized this just this week.

I do not know what your response will be,
or even if you will pick up the phone when I call.

Though I still want you to know.
You were my first love.

The feelings will last a lifetime,
and I may take them with me to my grave,
but I want you to know.
You were my first love.

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yeah I know emotional write and really not that good but it is 3 am and I cant sleep. Its how I feel and my brain is not wanting to make it any more colorful than this... perhaps a new on will branch off of this emotionaln piece in a few days...

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