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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2008-12-22 08:24 PM


In her dark and cold room
she sits on the edge of her bed,
waiting for the oportune moment
to let herself break free.

Silently she screams at
everything she's ever known,
its all hurting her...
and inside she's dying.

As this innocent girl
sits on the edge of her bed,
she tries not to look at the ground,
for on it is the invisible horror.

Many times she lay's awake,
trying to forget what happened.
When she closes her eyes the
nightmare just returns.

The floor of her room is tainted
with her forever stolen virginity.
Never will she have it back,
never will she forget what happened.

"When you know for sure its him...
kill him and tell no one."
This is what everyone told her,
but her chance might never come.

This girl sits on the edge of
her bed with a knife in her hand.
She'll tell no one
because she's given up her chance.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-12-22 08:29 PM


Spine chillingly awesome!!! AHH! I really like this... ((Library))

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2008-12-22 08:40 PM


aww thanks zach!!! glad you liked it!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

LittleWillow
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since 2007-12-27
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3 posted 2009-06-11 12:49 PM


This is great!
Well done!

x

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