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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2008-12-22 06:46 PM

Now heres a funny story,
when God and Satan played a game
they both had different methods
but their intentions were the same

they introduced me to my world
a man with army skin
he told me all the places
and the fights they put him in

he was on a discharge
from an effed up mental state
I promised i'd take care of him
I took a bite of Satans bait

soon we talked of marriage
the house we'd build brand new
he was going to start a business
all my dreams were coming true =D

Then God sped up the time clock
ahd Satan made him go
he said he would come back for me
when I dont quite know

so this is what happens
when God and Satan compete
another bruised and beaten heart
lie lifeless in defeat

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-12-23 09:20 AM

OMFGSH KRYSTI!!! AHH! this is like! AMAZING!!! I was like....

... Well it looked something like that.... lol. Anywho.. Great poem!! (Of course its going in my library.. duhh.. lol )

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-12-23 01:32 PM

Wow this is amazing and so sad at the same time. I love it

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-12-23 08:30 PM

Lovely Krysti, I miss you!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful poem, remember, there is a reason for everything. Keep holding on, endure, and the end will come out alright. I promise.

-Love
Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-12-24 01:02 PM

WOW Hunnie! That was beautiful!
I hope you're OK. Hang in there!

(Library)

My melancholy is purely my own

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

5 posted 2009-01-12 04:18 AM

*Hug*

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