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Behind These Blue Eyes
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Behind These Blue Eyes |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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 Many times I've cried Felt the stinging of my red eyes So many times felt broken up inside And had to hide myself in lies I know all too well how this goes This is just another repeat in my life It only took two words to kill me "Its over" serves it right in this strife. Don't worry about me My heart will mend And these eyes will learn not to cry I'll try to see the light around the bend Fallen so many times My eyes grow colder I can see that you never cared But I've learn this lesson as my time grows older. You'll never see how I feel Can't understand what's on my mind. Why I feel like shouting at you And why It hurts to be in this bind Don't try to fix the broken Because the broken is through with you You should of saw this coming If only you knew.. [This message has been edited by Falling rain (12-15-2008 11:05 PM).] |
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Baby_Girl Junior Member
since 2008-05-10
Posts 21OH, United States |
Wow... really strong poem...keep up the great work!!!!!!! I loved it! Baby~Girl |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Neat picture! I had a question. Where did you come up with a title for your poem? Was it because of the picture or something you had referenced? The only thing that I saw which could point toward blue eyes was, "My eyes grow colder." Just wondering. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Well the title I got was from a song. Behind These Hazel Eyes by Kelly Clarkson. I used "blue eyes" instead because I have blue eyes myself. And the picture played a part of it. And you got it right. "cold eyes" are referring to my eyes after the break up and how I had to make it through. Thanks for reading my poem though. -Zach So together but so broken inside |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Nice!!! I love pancakes!!! |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
aww, zach i'm still really sorry. i hope you get through this and come out even stronger when through. if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, i'll always be that 10 hour drive away here with emmalee and tori waiting for you to come. and since that's really unrealistic (lol), i'm always online for you to talk to. hope everything goes better than you thought it would!!! love ya bunches <3 .:~]Julianna[~:. |
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