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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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"Okay this poem is SUPER long.. Really long for me. But I just kept rhyming and rhyming.. I think its a little too much.. But I think you guys get my point in this super long,bad poem.. It was written about one of my friends. They know who they are so I'm not gunna point her out. But I hope she get's my messege in this.. Thanks for reading... If you did.." -Zach Her tear soaked eyes Are flooding the room. Little does the world know Her soul is to leave soon.. See the misfit in the mirror. See the one with the broken heart. She's the one we all know and love But she's abused and torn apart.. Her past is written in bloody scars Running down both her arms. Put down the weapon. Please disarm. We don't want to go there Please, I'm here. I want to help you. Please don't fear. The past is long gone. We can't change that. Your easing up But here you sat. I couldn't help. She went too far. Her name is to remember. Now to start her memoir. She had a beauty. No other had. Inner beauty shines the brightest. But her soul was breaking;her smile sad. This girl's body is living. But her soul's long gone. That leaves me here to sing this song. Please learn a lesson Learn it well. Or pray to find Your way in hell Because no light is shining in her eyes While the leafs left changing Her soul continues to die. Now im here in my room Crying out the pain inside Because I can't wear this mask This pain I can't just hide. I miss her spirit Her beautiful heart But her's is dead now. Not a spark of happiness lie in her heart. What could I've done to change her past To let her live longer Make it last. But theres no hope That I can see My eyes blind How can this be? |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
pretty long indeed but love reading it, great one :-) ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Wow zach, that's equal to like...4 of ur poems! lol im just kidding. Great write, I love it. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
lol. No kidding! i was like "Phew!" right after I got finished. lol. Thanks for reading guys! -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
that was soooooo great of a poem!?!i so much loved it!?! |
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TrueDesire12 Junior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 11England |
What a great poem, loved reading it! TrueDesire xx |
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Rand0m_guy54321 New Member
since 2008-12-08
Posts 7U.S. |
Wow that was very long but worth it! awesome poem |
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what_hope? New Member
since 2008-12-10
Posts 9sc |
i like this poem onsepter 10 2008 ashlen alen killed her self and some of us are still in the dark praying 4 light |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Oh I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you and the others mourning her death are doing okay.. Thanks for reading my poem guys!  -Zach So together but so broken inside |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
wow zach. this was absolutly stunning. i didn't even notice the length because it was so amazing. really great job on this one...its one of my favorites!!! library.. .:~]Julianna[~:. |
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