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Octave
Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-12-12 01:09 PM


One Hunderd Feet

Standing on this roadside
Standing in this crowd
One day up and
One hundred down

Sick of this pattern
That i know too well
Can't take it any more
I'm just an empty shell

Too tired to cry
Too tired to even care
Surrounded by strangers
Who just stop and stare

Loath my self-hatred
Detest my petty tears
Cracks in the mirror
Self-directed jeers

Hate this person i've become
A person i simply want to kill
I would not hesitate
If i just had the will

These tears are meaningless
That trickle down my face
Standing on this roadsde
Covered in disgrace

When will my day come
For happiness or sleep
I don't care which one
As long as i don't weep

Standing in this crisis
Standing in this crowd
One day up and
One hundered down.

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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-12-16 06:56 PM


Loath my self-hatred
Detest my petty tears
Cracks in the mirror
Self-directed jeers

Hate this person i've become
A person i simply want to kill
I would not hesitate
If i just had the will

wow. this was great.

KandyGrl511
Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52
Michigan
2 posted 2008-12-23 08:33 PM


wow that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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