Teen Poetry #8 |
One Hundred Feet |
Octave Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 186Highlands, Scotland. |
One Hunderd Feet Standing on this roadside Standing in this crowd One day up and One hundred down Sick of this pattern That i know too well Can't take it any more I'm just an empty shell Too tired to cry Too tired to even care Surrounded by strangers Who just stop and stare Loath my self-hatred Detest my petty tears Cracks in the mirror Self-directed jeers Hate this person i've become A person i simply want to kill I would not hesitate If i just had the will These tears are meaningless That trickle down my face Standing on this roadsde Covered in disgrace When will my day come For happiness or sleep I don't care which one As long as i don't weep Standing in this crisis Standing in this crowd One day up and One hundered down. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
Loath my self-hatred Detest my petty tears Cracks in the mirror Self-directed jeers Hate this person i've become A person i simply want to kill I would not hesitate If i just had the will wow. this was great. |
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KandyGrl511 Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52Michigan |
wow that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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