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Teen Poetry #8
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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
0 posted 2008-12-07 10:58 PM

so much effort yet no reward

i jump, i scream, yet you still dont see me

invisibleas air, forever to be unknown

hoping for a break

what i would give to have you as a close friend

i look for you but then never say hi

i talk to you but never reveal the truth

my eyes saying everything that i wont dare let escape from my lips

what do i have to do?

you are as impossible as the sea

forever unyeilding to me
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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-12-08 07:26 PM

I think it was really good, and to the point, i liked it!!!

I love pancakes!!!
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