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Teen Poetry #8

For my future

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-12-02 07:55 PM

Short and crappy, but here it goes

Who are you?
What is it that you see?
I see the future,
Where it isn't meant to be.

Yeah, I take steps back.
I breath in the air,
But for my future,
Is all that I care.

I love pancakes!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-12-04 11:08 AM

I bet you could do a lot more with this. It's just kinda raw...but the thoughts are good. Work with this, expand your thoughts....then repost it

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-12-04 07:06 PM

I'll try to expand my thoughts, and if i come up with something good than i'll repost it.

I love pancakes!!!

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