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Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

0 posted 2008-12-01 09:35 AM

I'm not sure if this is too vivid and sadistic to be displayed here, but i'm sure the admin will eradicate it if it is

Just to clarify, I'm not condoning any actions stated in this poem, it's just used as a dramatic device, anyway here goes...

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I’d carve your promises into my wrists
as a reminder of a love that’s dead,
I’d tear apart those lips that I had kissed
to avenge all the times that they had lied.

I’d rip out your tongue, and then watch you choke
just as you forced me to choke back my tears,
I’d make you scream for times you never spoke
until the ringing silence reaches my ears.

I’d devour your sorrow, tasting regret
that you failed to love the beast you awoken,
I’d haunt your happiness, not to forget
That I had once smiled, as now I’m broken.

I’d burn your façade so tears are but steam
so superficial beauty drips away,
I’d gouge out my eyes and in darkness dream
if it could convince your love to stay.

I’d steal sunlight and bring it back to your eyes
if I knew that it would make your smile true,
I’d plunge of off the Earth to my demise
if it made you see how much I love you.

I’ll do my best to realise your pleasure
For, through every hardship, your smile’s treasure,
I’ll keep you safe, in my arms, forever
as long as I’m saved from desperate measures.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-12-01 07:34 PM

Wow, this is so amazing, your talent is so well lets just say WOW!!! lol

I love pancakes!!!

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

2 posted 2008-12-01 10:12 PM

I love this! Its so powerful and strong! THe figurative language is really strong here- good job
Rhia

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-12-01 11:09 PM

wow! in order to say something that has not been said yet i will think real creative.... but wow was my first impression...
A very strong piece and I got the whole mental image through every lone.. great!!!
Krysti

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