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Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-11-28 10:03 PM

"Wow this poem is super duper long...Enjoy?"

I told myself many times
that it had ended
And that there was no hope for us
And that you left my heart wounded.

You were once my light
When ever I found myself in darkness
You picked me up
When I felt hopeless..

You hugged me
and held me tight
You were my back up
when I found myself in a fight

You were once there
But it all had to end
I hoped that this wasn't true
But you still wanted to be friends

I spent many nights
Crying myself to sleep
You broke my heart
And my eyes can't stop to not weep

I spent my time alone thinking
That this was suppose to be
But my tear filled eyes
Are to blind to see

Where's the truth in this?
What was your reason behind it all?
Or was this just a silly game
And in the end I was left to fall

I caught myself one day
You were once again on my mind
But my heart started hurting
And it was there to remind

I still love you..
My heart is shouting inside
It yearns for you again
But my mind just can't decide

My heart is pulling
left and right.
My mind and chest is wrenching
And I think I'm starting to lose the fight

Will there be any hope in my case?
Or will this secret continue to hide?
Will I be forever stuck like this?
I guess this secret's locking up inside..

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-11-28 11:04 PM

Really Great poem, i was a lil hesitant to read, cuz its a lil long, and i have a short attention span, but your such a great poet that i had to try and i'm glad i did.

I love pancakes!!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-12-01 09:14 PM

zach this was really good. i haven't been on pip for a while, and when i came on like...10 minutes ago, i was looking for something that would strike me. and then i saw this and i was like "whoa!!! thats amazing..." so yeah...great job once again!!! can't wait to get this duet we're working on out here!!!
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.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-12-01 10:59 PM

Zach.. It truly is great to be back and I will try to stay back now. but it is very hard juggling two jobs school and fitness classes in the AM. lol

now this poem... WOAH! It reminds me exactly how my ex feels right now.. I feel the pain he is feeling. but its not an easy part for either the breakee or the one getting broken up with.. its hard either way. but you did a great job at showing your emotions in this one.. gawd how i missed your poems

Krysti

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