Teen Poetry #8 |
Gears of War ( war is epic) |
I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
don't worry not the video game but it this was inspired from war as in the game but this is my storyline that i have made up, hope you enjoy, but hate the sickening of war in my poem....Comment,Rate,Appreciate ________________________________________________________ "Gears of War" The Shadow of this war remains still today Bullets were flying everywhere like the falling rain Just because you've forgotten doesn't heal the pain You thought you were genius at this game of war Those tactics you used really weren't any fun You never surrendered and i never stopped firing my gun Fourteen years have passed since that day Life simply moved on But you refused you were left behind while this war was done I made you run i made you go away come running back and i'll cut you down anyway You did what you must and what you would for i have doomed you to a fiery hell The life i took from you saved the world from destruction but the life i took is the reason i am stuck in this cell |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow Keagan! great imagery! -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Awesome!!! Love it!!! "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
the game cant compare to these words of a master. |
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