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0 posted 2008-11-24 11:22 PM


don't worry not the video game but it  this was inspired from war as in the game  but this is my storyline that i have made up,   hope you enjoy, but hate the sickening of war in my poem....Comment,Rate,Appreciate
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                        "Gears of War"


The Shadow of this war remains still today
Bullets were flying everywhere like the falling rain
Just because you've forgotten
doesn't heal the pain

You thought you were genius at this game of war
Those tactics  you used  really weren't any fun
You never surrendered
and i never stopped firing my gun

Fourteen years have passed since that day
Life simply moved on
But you refused
you were left behind while this war was done

I made you run
i made you go away
come running back
and i'll cut you down anyway

You did what you must and what you would
for i have doomed you to a fiery hell
The life i took from you saved the world from destruction
but the life i took is the reason i am stuck in this cell


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1 posted 2008-11-25 08:13 AM


wow Keagan! great imagery!

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

freeand2sexy
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2 posted 2008-11-25 03:11 PM


Awesome!!! Love it!!!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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3 posted 2008-11-25 04:46 PM


the game cant compare to these words of a master.
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