Teen Poetry #8 |
Anthem For The Underdog.. |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
So this goes out to all the underdogs of the world, the people who against all odd find the courage to battle on, the kids at school who are continually beaten, pushed and bullied and the plain ol' jane's like myself who are destined for great things but can't quite find the courage to reach there destiny and to Keagan and Zach, two young man who showed me the world through an underdogs eyes. _____________________________________ You say you know just who I am But you have no idea The broken pieces of my life Is after all what brought you here? But I’m still here and I’m standing Because I’m tired of backing down Tired of all the hurtful words And being kicked down on the ground I’m here now and I’m hurting Standing in a pool of pain In the blood of a thousand hearts That’s been to hell and back again You try so hard to bring me down But you still don’t understand You can’t break the broken So here come take my hand Now it’s your turn to see How it feels to be like me So here we go I’ll knock you down Leave you bleeding on the ground Your here now and you’re hurting Standing in a pool of pain In the blood of a thousand hearts That’s been to hell and back again So remember this feeling How it feels to be alive What it’s like to see the world Through an underdog’s eyes To all the victim’s in the world Who can’t see past the fog? This is a ballad for the bullies An anthem for the underdog |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
From one Underdog to another.. Great work! You captured the feeling perfectly and your words are pretty good. Great work again.. -Zach I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Amazing as always. Great write. {~~*~~} Miss.Emmalee |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
Jess,wow. amazing but only one thing i have to criticize is that i may be an underdog, i may be one forever but i never will take an advantage and make other people be underdogs under my will, im not like that...no body should, but yet the world is full of people and people that despise other people so the ones that choose to bully are just scared of the world. much love jess keagan |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
THanks Guys... And Keagan.. I Know THAT!! lol |
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