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Teen Poetry #8

Thank you for today

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-11-06 12:42 PM

A place I often wish to go,
To cry, and hold my head up high,
To know that it is ok to struggle, and stumble,
But I keep it all inside,
Burying it deep as if I was digging my own crypt,

Dear lord, I often wonder about my life,
If I lead it the way you meant for it to be lead,
Is there something I need to change to make it seem right?
To follow my path to your home, so peaceful a place it is,
There is no place I rather be than where I feel completely free,

Don’t you feel sorry for me as you read about my life,
Just remember, you each have a story of yours to share,
I just share mine with the world, just think of all the good times,
We spent together, the smiles we shared, and hugs that showed we cared,

I wish to unwind away from this life, just for a little bit,
My eyes are shut now, and I am lost in a dream of reality,
As I look heaven bound, I promise to hold on each day,
When I sleep at night, I ask for nothing more, but thank the lord,
For giving me today and no worries if there is a tomorrow.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

MixedChica
Junior Member

since 2006-11-10

Posts 34

1 posted 2006-11-11 03:19 AM

This poem is really good. Its really well written and i feel like i can really relate. Kepp up the good work

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

2 posted 2006-11-11 06:21 PM

I think this is really good. I liked how you wrote it, and the flow was also good.
Nice work on it.
: )

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