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I'm through with you
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I'm through with you |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Sitting here Tears falling without a sound How could you do this honey? My mind simply can't be found I saw what every guy Wishes that weren't true But that's how this goes.. Why you did this I'll never know. All over him Its only been a few weeks We broke up last week My heart is still weak Calling you something That isn't true Wouldn't be nice But that's what you are inside; your "inner you" Ignoring me Isn't gunna help my broken heart Did you really have to do it? Was it worth wild to see me torn apart? Don't ask me for forgiveness I'm all done with you I'll pick up my things and leave That's all that you wanted too A month passes now You say your close to wedding bells This guy must be something huh? Because seeing you now is like being in hell A burning desire To just get up and run Run from this life Run in till I can't see the sun. Can't take this life anymore Seeing you happy is eating me Till I'm nothing But I can't look at you so happy and free Good-bye my almost lover Good-bye to the love we use to share I'm not gunna be around so promise me this Was I the only one that you had feelings for to care? [This message has been edited by Falling rain (11-03-2008 09:08 PM).] |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
You have certainly out-done yourself. In my opinion, this is one of your greatest poems. It astounded me in every way possible, absolutly amazing...and yet very sad ;( Library..  .:~]Julianna[~:. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Amazing poem!!! Great job! "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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