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Teen Poetry #8

No More Lies

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-10-30 07:46 PM

Sweet revenge isn't so sweet
Especially when, it makes you weak

Calm your rage, use the past
I thought you said this was gonna last

I walk alone remembering your cries
Guilt sucks, especially after you told those lies

Crazy i am whatever the day
Don't charge at me or it's the ground you'll face

Step up, have some pride
Or be a coward and fall back and hide

Listen to me i got words to say
Or let me guess, it isn't important today

Don't speak, I don't want to hear your voice
Because it's anything but rejoice

You just stay where you are
You cannot stop me now that I've gotten this far

The truth is larger than life itself
But it will stay the same, like the pictures on the shelf

Keep your mouth shut, i don't want another lie
I'll speak for you"good bye"

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-10-30 08:10 PM

Woah, great write. It was very to the point and strong. Fantastic job.

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-10-30 08:46 PM

OH My Flaming Gezzus.. WOW!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-10-31 12:55 PM

Wowzer keagan.. This is really good..

p.s Whitney was reading over my shoulder and she say's she REALLY like's it.. hehe...

Lot's of luv!! :P

-Zach
"HOMEGIRL LOVES YOU!!!"

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