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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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0 posted 2008-10-14 02:07 PM


Ah, ok. Little scared about posting this one, as its completely different from anything i've written before. Be truthful. Still not sure what my feelings are on it. You can take some wild guesses about what it's really about.

My Animal Sings

Fingers stroke silken strings
As hand moves down
Breathless neck
Each fine strand
Piercing broken finger tip
Body pressed against
Cracking heart
Each note screaming deceit
Emotion pours from
Open wounds of tune
Both bodies working
As one, with one
Together they rise
Breathless and valiant
Together as one
My beast and I we sing


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1 posted 2008-10-14 04:56 PM


Haha yeah.... At first I thought it was something more then just love.. lol. But then you said the last line and I was like "Oh... OHHH!!" lol Its a great poem whether which way you look at it.

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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