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Teen Poetry #8

Wish upon a star

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-10-10 07:43 PM

shooting star Pictures, Images and Photos

A shooting star
My one last hope.
To find my lover.
To let this pain cope.

I make a wish.
With all images of him kept in mind.
This is my last resort..
How hard is it to find?

My knight in shining armor.
The other piece to my heart.
Living this lie...
Is tearing me apart.

Why am I left with this broken heart?
Why am I the one to make it through?
Please make this wish come true tonight.
Because all I want is you.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

1 posted 2008-10-10 11:39 PM

wow, i love it. sweet... i can relate on this one somehow :-)

Why am I left with this broken heart?
Why am I the one to make it through?
Please make this wish come true tonight.
Because all I want is you. --- i like reading these lines

~~*K. B.*~~

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-10-11 03:27 PM

Wow, great poem! I can relate

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-10-12 03:51 PM

Awe, I love it. Great job.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Taylor See
Member

since 2008-10-07

Posts 55
North Carolina, US

4 posted 2008-10-13 02:53 PM

Very nice poem Zach, very personal and powerful. I like the picture added in too.

The ending is my favorite part.

Keep 'em coming =)

Taylor

And as each player moves their piece, confident and tall
They forget that they can move themselves, in the greatest game of all

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