Teen Poetry #8 |
Raven |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Raven Raven tipped his wing in flight In night, through wind, Octobers chill And landed in the dead trees branch A hollow tree, decaying black And ugly sound from him comes forth A raven shriek in answered lilt I watch the bird fly far away And see his wing caress the moon His plumage swoops down from above A piece of black from night’s abyss And all the while my thoughts look deep In hopes and frailties he may come back Bit in the midnight diamond sky The raven never sounds again And many moons and years shall pass Before I dare forget his sigh "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
||
© Copyright 2008 RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed - All Rights Reserved | |||
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
OH YAY!! You're back! Everyones coming back!! Alex Kate...OK maybe just the two. Is this a sequel to your "A Ravens Wisper"? I don't know, but I realy liked the symbolism...not sure I got all of this. As for the title WHO's COPYING WHO?? hahahahaha Anyway loved the poem. OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
||
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Uh ok NOW I'm adding it to my library...:p OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
||
young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
kate, fantastic to read your work. Such subtlety is refreshing. Great to read your work again. |
||
Taylor See Member
since 2008-10-07
Posts 55North Carolina, US |
Wow, that is amazing! Very descriptive and the flow is excellent. The imagery is fantastic. If this is a sequel I'm gonna have to dig up the first one Looking forward to more, Taylor |
||
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
AHh it's good to be back, sorry for the delay, but I have had schooling and whatnot, so I took this creative writing class, from the sound of it it has helped thanks for all the comments. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |