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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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I've been watching you cut holes in the sky with your nail, poking your fingers through to capture god, but it seems a bit circular doesn't it? To hold god in your palm is to master yourself. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow this is very in-depth... I mean way to much for me to understand. lol.. Great poem though! -Zach "I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!" |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
OMG your back.. And about bloody time too i say!... Took you long enough!.. He he.. I love your work so much it scares me.. It Really Really does.... The thing i really love about ur work is the story u find between the lines of all your stuff.. It really is inspirational!... Well Done!! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Alex! Where have you been man? Nice to have you back. Exelent poem by the way. I'm too tired to deciefer it right now...but I'll take a go at it later. OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Thank you all. it has been sometime since I've even written something let alone posted. Thanks for your feedback. |
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Taylor See Member
since 2008-10-07
Posts 55North Carolina, US |
Again, very deep and thought-provoking. I enjoyed this one very much. Quite a lot of talent you have! Will be looking for more, Taylor |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Now I feel stupid. Reading this the second time it's pretty obvious what you mean. People who keep looking for God through external sources are bound for failure? You can control God by controlling yourself? Interesting idea...not that I agree, but I can see a bit inherit (if incomplete) truth. OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Earl, that's kinda close. More of my point was that (in my view) one cannot know the complete nature of God (any god for that matter) without first controlling yourself. |
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