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Teen Poetry #8

The Heart Theif

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-09-29 04:28 PM

Not very good. =[

The Heart Theif

Take my senses
Steal my sight
Take my bark
Take my bite

Take me if
You must
Take my love
Take my trust

Hold my heart
In your hand
Take it all
Be my friend

Ignore my
Pleas and cries
Steal my life
Before you rise

Take it all
Everything. you
Circle round me
Golden ring

From my chest
Heart you rip
Take it all just
Not our friendship

Take it all
I say not don't
Just stand by me
For its you i want

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-09-29 07:17 PM

How can you say it's not good? It was Awesome!!!!!!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-09-30 07:15 PM

I agree it was really good! I like it.. (library!)

-Zach

"Is it enough to breath? Somebody rip my heart out and leave me here to bleed. Is it enough to die? Somebody save my life I'd rather be anything but o

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