Teen Poetry #8 |
Witness |
Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Witness Here is the witness I know who I am I wish it were simple It’s not meant to be There’s work to be done And reason to know Why white is not black Nor doves like the crow Yet why do I reason When reason alone Brings not but coldness For words can’t condone This is the power Of light unto life The power of friends To end my own strife So thank you Hibebe My dear patient friend You guide me to paths I will walk till the end Oh thank you Oh thank you Oh thank you indeed Through candle or mirror You have fought back my need This is my witness It comes from on high That I have an angel An thousand leagues nigh Don't believe Everything you Think [This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (09-27-2008 01:42 AM).] |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
wow this was awesome. i loved it. the best part i thought was the ending. This is my witness It comes from on high That I have an angel An thousand leagues nigh so strong of a close. great job. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow.. this is just simple stunning and the last stanza just blew me away.. Great work!!! -Zach |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
Yet why do I reason When reason alone Brings not but coldness For words can’t condone loved these lines... this is good. ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks So much guys. FRANK! You CANNOT speak to yourself that way! It's disrespectful and rude. |
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