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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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0 posted 2008-09-26 09:46 PM



Witness

Here is the witness
I know who I am
I wish it were simple
It’s not meant to be

There’s work to be done
And reason to know
Why white is not black
Nor doves like the crow

Yet why do I reason
When reason alone
Brings not but coldness
For words can’t condone

This is the power
Of light unto life
The power of friends
To end my own strife

So thank you Hibebe
My dear patient friend
You guide me to paths
I will walk till the end

Oh thank you Oh thank you
Oh thank you indeed
Through candle or mirror
You have fought back my need

This is my witness
It comes from on high
That I have an angel
An thousand leagues nigh


Don't believe Everything you Think

[This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (09-27-2008 01:42 AM).]

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Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 2008-09-27 09:13 AM


wow this was awesome. i loved it. the best part i thought was the ending.

This is my witness
It comes from on high
That I have an angel
An thousand leagues nigh

so strong of a close. great job.

Falling rain
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2 posted 2008-09-27 09:45 AM


Wow.. this is just simple stunning and the last stanza just blew me away.. Great work!!!

-Zach

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
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3 posted 2008-09-29 03:51 AM


Yet why do I reason
When reason alone
Brings not but coldness
For words can’t condone


loved these lines... this is good.

~~*K. B.*~~

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
4 posted 2008-09-29 10:24 AM


Thanks So much guys.

FRANK! You CANNOT speak to yourself that way! It's disrespectful and rude.

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