Your T-shirt....... (My duet with Jullianna)

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Teen Poetry #8

Your T-shirt....... (My duet with Jullianna)

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-09-24 07:30 PM

Your t-shirt left still smells of you.
I would burn this but it brings back good and bad.
How could I have knew?
That you would get under my skin making me burning mad.

This t-shirt I hold here in my hands,
  reminds me of how you lied to me and threw yourself
  at someone else of your free will.
  You hurt me so horribly...these burns are here to prove it.

Left broken and bleeding.
Mascara is running down with the tears of your once forgotten lover.
Did you have this planned my dear?
Was I the one to blame for this to happen?

I've realized its not my fault
I've ended up this way...broken and bleeding.
All these injuries are from your torture,
Now when will someone come and make me better?

Who's gunna be my knight in shinning armor?
Hercules is no where in sight..
I'm just left with myself and your hurting memory of that t-shirt.
But I'll gather the pieces of my shattered heart and move on today.

For today is what makes my tomorrow,
If I could live and make it through
what may seem like my recovery time,
Im sure that tomorrow will be better...without you.

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-09-24 11:25 PM

It was a great poem!!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-09-28 09:32 AM

Hey Zach!!! We did it!!! And I think it turned out pretty good, wouldn't you? By the way the stanza's that you wrote are so much better than mine, they stand out more, lol. Ttyl!

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-09-28 10:45 AM

Haha. Hey Julianna!! We did do it!! lol. I think we did a pretty good job if you don't mind me sayin. lol.. We should write another duet sometime. They are fun to do. hahaha. . Well Ttyl!!

-Zach

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-10-05 10:50 PM

"Who's gunna be my knight in shinning armor?
Hercules is no where in sight.."

That and the ending are my favorite parts. Great job guys.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

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