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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
TRYING TO RUN YET TAKING STEPS BACK IS IT THE HOPE, THE TRUST, OR THE LOVE I LACK? I’M BEING TORN APART BY EMOTIONS EXTREME; FAILING TO LEARN AND FAILING TO DREAM THINGS I ONCE KNEW SLOWLY FADING AWAY FRIENDS THAT ONCE CARED LEFT WITH NOTHING TO SAY. I STILL TRUDGE ON THROUGH ALL MY DESPAIR QUIET AND LONELY YET I KNOW PEOPLE CARE “WHAT’S WRONG WITH ME?” A QUESTION I SILENTLY WONDER THEN GIVE UP AND TRY ANOTHER DO YOU THINK YOU COULD HELP ME DECIPHER THE PAIN AND MAYBE, JUST MAYBE, HOLD OFF THE RAIN… |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
AWESOME...it touched my heart and my soul...NICE WORK THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I luv it! it's so good Live in the present but don't forget the future |
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Dark Icy New Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 4No Man's Land |
You are an amazing poet. There is a book I have a very good feeling you would be able to enter. When I figure out its name, ill let you know. |
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