Teen Poetry #8 |
Crying is okay |
freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
The tears don't flow down my cheek At least not anymore I thought it was a sign of being weak But my opinions are different than before Now I wish and beg that I could cry And let the pain, just go But it won't, I wonder why Does anyone even know I miss the nasty taste of salt I know it sounds so crazy My eyes get watery, but the tears still halt They won't go, not even gently Now I wish I knew what I know now Before I had wished the tears away But at least the truth has been found I finally know that crying is okay The tears don't flow down my cheek But I know they will, someday It's not a sign of being weak Cuz it washes the pain away |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
WOW WOW WOW ..........WOW,,it's so nice i really loved it ...all i can say is WOW...LIBRARY THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I love the way you expressed your thoughts oon cryin and added anecdotes without losing your poetic ability. i am adding this to my favorite poems ever file!!! |
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