Teen Poetry #8 |
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The show must go on |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois ![]() |
Years of heartbreak and disappointment. This isn't new to me. Tears have to be shed to build a stronger self But how can I been so blind to see? I know this isn't hard But you don't know what to say. Can't find the right words to help me Tired from keeping these thoughts at bay I know my futile tears will never change the past I have to move on from this. Can't live and let this last I'll watch you grow happy And have a family to grow old But it hurts me deep inside My heart is growing cold. I know I'm better then To hold this grudge inside But don't want to talk about it Don't let this deep fire to come alive. I'm gunna forget about what all happened And take my lesson I learned from this song. You got to learn from your mistakes The show must go on... |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Hey Guys! Its been sometime that I've written something good. Trying to get back into writing.. So please forgive me if the story line ain't clear. Hope you enjoy this. -Zach |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
hey man, this is great. my favorite part is listed beneith. its a great poem and i just wrote a guitar piece that fits perfect with it, so the rythm was really easy for me to get. loved it dude, for real. I'll watch you grow happy And have a family to grow old But it hurts me deep inside My heart is growing cold. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
hey zach...this poem is awesome!!! and stop saying that your writing sucks!!!!! otherwise i'll have to zip your mouth back up again!!! library... ~*Julianna*~ |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
I think this poem is so GREAT and you can write so well....NICE JOP THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
you really do write extremely well...don't worry about any temporary mental blocks. they all subside eventually. |
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