Is Aphroditie's spell a spell or a curse?

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Teen Poetry #8

Is Aphroditie's spell a spell or a curse?

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-08-25 06:03 PM

Here's Tori's and I's duet.. Enjoy!
"I love you"
Simple words
With little meaning
When it comes to a one night stand

We were young and knew nothing
But only to have a little fun
It was like heaven when we touched
The planets came in line..

Hands grasped,
wrapped around
Each others body
Cupids magic; cast its little spell

Rose petal like lips
Press like there's no tomorrow
Gasping for air
Every time we needed it..

Silk smooth skin
Feather like touch.
Your hand rubs against my cheek
Satin wrapped around us

Your arms encircled me,
clinging to my waist.
Your lips found mine
with such effortless passion.

But that seemingly glorious night
was nothing compared to now.
You've left me broken and stranded
with a child to call my own.

No letters, no phone calls,
not even a paycheck or two.
Where did you go when I needed you most?
I thought you loved me...?

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

1 posted 2008-08-26 12:41 PM

awe... such a tragic story. it happens in reality and it is just quite sad to end up that way. but i enjoyed reading it... nice one.

~~*K. B.*~~

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

2 posted 2008-08-26 07:45 PM

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-08-27 06:28 PM

great poem zach and tori. really interesting chemistry in the writing (shut up zach...don't say its dirty!!!!lol). but ya, great poem...i really felt the emotion in this one.
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~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12

Posts 18
BULGARIA

4 posted 2008-08-28 01:42 PM

"Your arms encircled me,
clinging to my waist.
Your lips found mine
with such effortless passion."

This poem is beautiful and in the same time sad. Good job!

-Desi-

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2008-09-24 02:45 PM

That's so sad!!!! tear....

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